The pudding thickens as Bentley reaches some interesting conclusions. Poor Monroe is still homeless and suffering from the heat . A useful solution to his problem seems to be getting farther away as Bentley begins his new anti-obesity in frogs campaign.
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Family Friendly Critter Comic Adventures
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Love the recent addition of the backgrounds!
Thanks Will, I’m trying to remind myself to stay balanced in my strip composition. I can sometimes get lost in the characters and forget the importance of props and backgrounds in my storytelling. It is also a matter of getting use to the software production environment and all the tools I have to aid in the composition. For me the trick is to find the right balance as always.
Do I see backgrounds? I do! I do! Nice work. Now let’s move camera… middle panel could have been a close up, its definitely supported by the dialogue and keeping the overall strip composition just a tad more interesting. “My nose is already plenty aware.” is a very funny line and might have been the end punch, what do you think about that possibility? Nice strip regardless and now I’m itchin’ to see one of these bullfrogs! Keep up the great work and remember to have fun!
PS if you were to have that as your punch line, in another universe say, keep it on the full shot. Hope you don’t mind my two cents.
Bill,
Your insights and suggestions are always much appreciated. I feel very fortunate to have someone of your skill and experience willing to share their knowledge and guidance. I take every suggestion as an opportunity to learn and improve. And yes, the frogs are coming.